Comments on: Re: Enquiry A8992bc8-1114EE

By: Peter Craddock

Peter Craddock — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 17:45:21 +0000

Yes, the offer to review my first chapters is still valid. I would be extremely grateful for any such reviews
Good luck with your own writing!

By: Eridger

Eridger — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 06:12:52 +0000

Oh! I forgot to ask! Is that offer to review your online pdf to read more still up for grabs? I’d love to read and review the rest, maybe do what I can to help you if ever you need it. And I’m too stupid to solve riddles…

I’m assuming that I don’t really need to put my email on here because, you know, it’s your site and you’d have access to all that I’ve put here. But yeah, email me if/when you get the time (or care enough to).

By: Eridger

Eridger — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 05:52:29 +0000

You’re an awesome writer, man. Seriously. I haven’t gotten around to reading the full five chapters of what you’ve posted yet – I have a lot of junk going on here, along with writing my own sci-fi stuff. But I definitely like it. I have to say, your storylines are killer. You haven’t overlooked anything, it seems.

I’ve been told that I’m a good I’m a good writer, but I’ve always had a problem with planning out stories. I get off to a good start but then get a major dose of writer’s block, usually abandoning the whole story. I have 40+ pages of introductory chapters… I’ve only just recently come up with a decent plot that I don’t see myself totally screwing up yet. It’d be awesome to learn how you come up with this stuff.

Oh, and ARPIA (the plug-in) is the most awesome thing that I have ever played/read. I personally think it could be extended, but it topped the storyline of every space game I’ve played.